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2013年6月13日大学英语四级作文解析

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  一 总体介绍:

2013年6月13日大学英语四级作文解析

1 出题题型:在经历了2014年2次的非图表写作考试后,今年再一次出现了对图画作文的考察,并且是以多卷多题的方式出现。笔者对于这种题型的解题思路已经在课堂上做了多次详尽的讲解,对于同学们解答起来,应该难度不大。

2 审题:纵观这三篇图画作文,找出图画主旨并不难,因为在题目指令中出现了以下的表达:………ess your view on……..,所以只要认真看懂题目,跑题的概率不大。

3 写作结构: 虽然三篇作文的写作主旨不同,但是写作框架基本一样,均可以采用三段式的结构来进行写作。同学们可以通过审题,接着自己写出中文的写作提纲,然后再根据6大功能段落写作法,写出这篇文章。

4 话题种类:依然是围绕教育类(家庭教育),社会热点类(电脑的广泛使用)等话题来出题。

  二 具体解析:(由于篇幅关系,就以一篇作文为例,大家可以举一反三,融会贯通)

1 根据审题,写出中文提纲:

第一段:简单描述这幅图(一定要注意细节描述,并且要灵活运用图画描述的句型来进行写作)

第二段:深度分析这幅画的深层含义(可以通过两个方面来论证:家长在孩子成长过程中所扮演的好和坏的角色)

第三段:表达观点,提出自己的'建议(提出“如何避免家长在孩子成长过程中起副作用的相关建议)

2 转化为6大功能段落写作

第一段:图画描述段

第二段:利弊分析段

第三段:表达观点段+建议措施段

  3 参考范文:

As is vividly shown in the cartoon,a young girl is talking with her mother. She says ironically, “Good news mom! I was accepted to the college of your choice!” Then, her mother smiles and seems content with this result. Apparently , if the children grow happily and healthily, it is advisable for their parents to produce positive influence on their children.

From the portrayal , we can conclude that the painter wants to convey such a message: It is parenting / upbringing that plays an increasingly essential role in their children’s growth. On the one hand, parents are always the first teacher of a child. They can choose to set a good example for their child or not. For example, we can easily understand that when a child regularly sees her/ his father doing something for others, she/ he will probably grow up looking for ways to help others, too. The same principle applies , however, to the opposite case: when the parent doesn’t give a child the right kind of education and example, for instance by bribing a child to do things just to save trouble for himself / herself, it is highly possible that the child will grow into a person who has a distorted understanding of the value of money.

To sum up , in this sense, it is always the responsibility of parents to educate their children well. And parents should realize their mislead behaviors. Only in these ways will children grow in a psychologically happy environment and realize their own dreams.

  三 备考建议:

1 对于四级写作任何一种作文类型(提纲作文,图表作文,图画作文,名言警句类评论式作文)都必须认真准备。

2 适当背诵各个话题类型(校园生活,社会热点,人生哲理)的优秀范文,并要默写。同时掌握根据范文的相关表达来仿写其他题目作文的写作技巧。

3 可以参加新东方四级写作备考课程,系统学习并掌握四级写作的各个要点(写作技巧)。

4 多写,多改才是提分的王道。