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篇一：Haste Makes Waste
The Proverb “Haste makes waste” has been widely accepted for many years. It reminds us that if we are to achieve our final goal we have to do it in a (1)down-to-earth way. (2)The truth of it is deep and profound.
(3)There are numerous examples supporting this argument. (4)A case in point is the ancient Chinese story of (5)“Helping the shoots grow by pulling”. This story proved that the haste caused not only waste but great loss. (6)For another example, some parents and teachers,(7①) in order to improve children’s academic performance in a short time, tend to put too heavy burden on children. This, (7②) as a result, brings the children(8) nothing but great pressure.
(9)All the above-mentioned tells us that we shouldn’t(10) be over anxious for quick results. Everything has its own (11)developing law. Therefore, (12)whatever we do, we should not pay too much attention to the speed and ignore these laws. 点评
(1)意为“脚踏实地”。
(2)意为“其中蕴涵着深远的道理”
(3)用于引出例证。
(4)意为“典型的例子”。
(5)引用“拔苗助长”的故事
(6)用于引出另外的例子
(7)插入语
(8)意为“只是，仅仅”。
(9)常用于得出结论
(10)意为“急于求成”。
(11)意为“发展规律”。
(12)引导让步状语从句，意为“无论什么”。
篇二：
Nowadays, (1)different people hold different views about whether or not one should expect a reward when doing a good deed. Some people think that a good deed should be given a certain reward. They say it is agreeable with the rule of fairness. (2①)Also, rewards can stimulate people’s enthusiasm to do good deeds.
(3)However, there are many others who take Leifeng as a model and be always ready to help others without expecting any reward. Everyone may be in trouble.(5)Only if you help others unselfishly, you can get others’ help when you need it. (2②)Besides, they maintain that one can enjoy happiness in doing good deeds, (6)they think, (7)which is the best return.
(8)Weighing up these tow arguments, I prefer the second one. (2③)First, being happy to help others is one of Chinese people’s traditional virtues.(2④) Second, this virtue(9) is of more significance for the creation of a harmonious society. (2⑤)To conclude, (10①)it is every citizen’s responsibility(10②)to do good deeds without expecting any reward.
点评
(1)用于引出对某事物的`不同观点。
(2)衔接词语使文章条例清晰、意思连贯。
(3)转折出另一种观点。
(4)意为“不期望任何火爆”，介词短语充当状语，注意此处without的用法。
(5)意为“只要”，引导条件状语从句。
(6)插入语。
(7)which引导非限制性定于从句。
(8)用于引出个人观点，weigh up意为“权衡”。
(9)“be of +n.”相当于“be+ adj.”。
(10)固定句式：It sb.+ to do sth.其中it是形式主语，不定式短语是实际的主语。
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