my teacher
I have an English teacher 。She is tall。She like playing with us。 She like dressing yellow clothes。 In her class ， I am very ative 。Because she is kind in class 。Our classmates like her so much。 But now ，she said ： she was left with us ， I am sorry to hear that 。 Because I love her very much。 I hope she can continue doing our teacher。
1。“She like playing with us。 She like dressing yellow clothes。 ”因主語是第三人稱單數，謂語採用動詞的'三單形式，故“like”應改為“likes”；“dress”意為“給某人穿衣”，故句中“dressing”應改為“wearing”。如採用並列賓語，這兩句可以合併為一句，更簡練：She likes wearing yellow clothes and playing with us。
2。“I have an English teacher 。She is tall。”如合併為“My English teacher is tall。”你認為哪種形式更好呢？
3。“Because she is kind in class 。Our classmates like her so much。 ”此句為含有原因狀語從句的複合句，從句放在句首用逗號，主句句首字母應小寫。“Our classmates ”改為“my classmates and I”更確切。
4。“But now ，she said ： she was left with us ， I am sorry to hear that 。 Because I Love her very much。 ”其中“But now ”與後句時態在時間上不符，故將“now”去掉。“she said ： she was left with us ， ”為賓語從句，出現三處錯誤：形式錯誤，去掉冒號;從句時態應改為過去將來時;“was left with us ”表達欠當。故此句改為“she said （that） she would leave us ， ”
“I am sorry to hear that 。 Because I Love her very much。 ”應改為“I am sorry to hear that because I love her very much。 ”
5。最後一句“I hope she can continue doing our teacher。 ”中的“doing”應改為“being”。
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