現今，在高校有許多大學生通過助學貸款完成自己的學業，但是有些學生畢業後沒有能力或拒絕按時還貸。對於學生還貸一事，你怎麼看?我們來看看六級考生怎麼說。
On Paying back Student Loans
Nowadays, college students who need financial aid can apply for student loans provided by state-owned commercial banks, which can help them pay their tuition fees and cover their necessary daily expense. Take Beijing Normal University as an example, the last year has witnessed that 245 college students applied for student loans.
However，to our disappointment, there is an increasing rate of students who have failed to refund the loans in time. Some students are really unable to repay the money after graduation because of unemploy-ment or some other reasons. But there are a number of students refu-sing to pay it back even though they can.
As for me，college students should increase their awareness of credit. Anyone in debt should try his best to repay the loans in due time. If they are really in great difficulty，it is proper to inform the bank as soon as pos-sible and apply for a delayed repayment. Only in this way can both college students and banks benefit from the policy.
寫作點評：
毫無疑問，第一段的大寫字母和資料能迅速吸引閱卷老師的. 眼球。同時使用了 witness, take…as an example等好詞和片語，無 疑增加了亮點。
第一段:直接提出該段中心“現今,在髙校有許多大學生通過 助學貸款完成自己的學業' 而後，“一句話”舉出例 子，更加形象地說明大學生申請助學貸款。
第二段:直接展現該段主題句“但是有些學生畢業後沒有能力 或拒絕按時還貸”。緊接著進行細節化的說明，用 unable to repay the money after graduation because of unemployment 和 refusing to pay it back even though they can來說明。
第三段:直接展現該段中心“我認為貸款的學生應如何對待還 貸問題”。認為,應該盡力償還貸款，如果實在有困 難，可以申請延期還貸。最後以倒裝句Only in this way can both college students and banks benefit from the policy.結尾。
點亮文章的詞語與句子：
1. financial aid 財政幫助
y for 申請
nd the loans 償還貸款
eness of credit 誠信的意識
in this way can both college students and banks benefit from the policy.(倒裝句，常用的一種亮點句型。)
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