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概要：事件----结果----结论
Para 2) 讲诉你有关幸福的亲身经历----起因---经过--结果 (答案通过前后对比揭示主题，值得学习)
Para 3) 总结---重新定义-----结论加强
The thought that a pain-free lifestyle equals happiness actually reduces one’s chances of achieving real happiness, which often contains some pain. In fact, true happiness has nothing to do with money.
When I was a little child, my family was poor but my parents loved each other and me very much. They went through many hardships and tried their best to make life easier and better for me. Hardships accompany happiness. I had a happy family then. We were in good spirits every day. Years later, our life has improved a lot and my parents can even buy everything I want for me. Unfortunately, they have to take part in all kinds of activities related to their business. I seldom see them now, let alone a holiday just with them. I am extremely unhappy about that.
In my opinion, I think money doesn’t equal happiness and so does a pain-free lifestyle. The real happiness is that everyone loves each other and stays with their beloved ones. Also, we should develop the appreciation for beauty, cherish the motivation to go after our dreams and achieve our goals.
【本文作者： 徐州七中 彭向梅。(公众号：草根英语行思教)】
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